Before I start, I have to say that I'm horrible at poetry. I have no sense for writing it, only a sense of knowing that it's horrible when I read it aloud. That said, this is my attempt at a something that could pass as a poem.
Joyful times, playful lights
Rays shine off the snow
Clear and bright.
Sea coat floes.
Gazing through the window.
Moonlight casting shadows.
Wondering why I have to wait.
'Til in comes winter break.
Bleh.
I don't see why you say you're horrible @ poetry. I liked this one of yours. :)
ReplyDeleteIt's quick and easy, like one of those really cool Japanese poems (no, not haiku, necessarily).
Thumbs up!
SO BRAVE.
ReplyDeleteAhaha, seriously, though. It's not as bad as you think it is. At least it's simple and winter-y. Agree with what Alex said above.
Wow not a bad poem! I enjoyed it. I don't like poetry myself. It describes winter perfectly.
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